In the holidays my family and I went to Dunedin. We went on a big plane. We picked up a rental car when we arrived at the airport. We were looking for a place to eat. I ate Mac Donald. I had a burger with salad and meat patties. It was delicious.
Next we went to Margret Mahey Park. I went on the big slide and it was cool.
Then we came back home on the same plane.
by Marii
I blew lots of bubbles. They went up, up, up into the sky. Then they went pop, pop, pop! I liked my bubbles because they were as big as tennis balls. They were shiny with rainbow colours.
By Marii
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.
We have a huge Autumn Tree at School. The leaves are rustling in the wind. The colourful leaves are gliding softly to the ground. The leaves are fluttering in the breeze. The brown leaves are crunching under my feet.
By Marii
Learning goal: We are learning to write a Recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write an orientation, events in order, and an ending.
In the holidays my family and I went to Tonga to visit my uncle. My uncle lived in Eua. I had a swim in the cool sea. The white sand was sparkling in the sun.It was very hot in Tonga.
I was happy to be back in New Zealand.
By Marii
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe popcorn using our five senses.
Yesterday we cooked popcorn. It smelt delicious. It looked yellow and lumpy. It popped like a fire cracker. It tasted salty and buttery. It crunched in mouth.
By Marii
