Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.
We have a huge Autumn Tree at School. The leaves are rustling in the wind. The colourful leaves are gliding softly to the ground. The leaves are fluttering in the breeze. The brown leaves are crunching under my feet.
By Marii
Marii, you got some very good descriptive words in your story. I really like the way you describe sounds and wind etc...Keep it up my girl. Mum
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